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Dragonfairy's blog: "MY POETRY"

created on 02/23/2009  |  http://fubar.com/my-poetry/b279897

Help Me!!

I wrote this today and I cant think of a title for it, any suggestions??

 

Untilted

Walking along the water front you feel alone,
Waves crashing, as the breeze brushes again your face.
Lifes problems weighing you down, you feel lost,
Head hung low, as sadness creeps around you.
A shinning light apears in front of you,
You feel the warmth, and it pleases you.
A single star above you, you feel at ease,
even on this cold nite, your heart is warmed beyond belief.
Your not alone, Im hear with you,
Your not lost, I'll show you the way.
Friendship pays to those who need it,
Brings happiness, and joy to those who cherish it.
Let me in for I can help,
Let me walk with you, so your not alone.
Raise your head so I can see you,
Happy days push away the sadness,
Cause with friendship's love there is no darkness,
With friendship's trust you wont be lost.
With friendship's understanding you can be who you are.
I give all this to you, from heart, mind, body and soul.
I'll be your shinning light forever more.....

 

any suggestions would be nice, or comments thanks.

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