this is a poem that i wrote in july of this year.
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As I lay here thinkin, "What in the world should I do",
All that comes to my mind, is me being wit you.
I want to be able to love you, I want to be able to care,
My life, my love, my hopes and dreams, is what I'm willing to share.
But, I'm afraid to fall for you, afraid to give all my love,
Because I don't want to get hurt again, by someone that I "thought" I loved.
So please.....promise not to hurt me, promise me that you'll care....And then....
My life, my love, my hopes and dreams, with you I will share.
My heart to yours I will carefully place,
The previous pain I felt, your love alone will erase.
Your smile, your style......
That swagger and your walk
Your personality and intelligence.....and even how you talk.
These are all things that I love about you
Oh and I almost forgot, you're popular and cute too.
So, hopefully this can be the beginning of something fresh and new.
My life, my love, my hopes and dreams......will all be shared wit you
