Ok, this is a poem I wrote a little while ago and I wanted to know some peoples opinions. I personally like the poem but it is a little dark.
A Dying Moment of Suicide
The message I write
I wrote for you
As my final hour approaches
I stretch my hand as far as I can
So to be held by you one last time...
But you never make it
Time stands still
You look at my now closing eyes
Wishing me peace
Knowing there is for me
But living with my memory
Each and every day
Haunts you until your time
When time stands still once more
Knowing it was all worth it
The pain gone from our eyes
In the heavenly bliss we now share
But people move onward
We are soon forgotten
Our bodies placed along side others
Only to be visited every now and then
Our Souls have moved on
And time starts up again
