Version 1
The Cold Winter Night
As I stood starring out the cabin’s large, delicate picture window, the snow began to fall. It looked like the angels had torn open pillows and began lightly sprinkling the pure, white down filler across the landscape. I stood watching the delicate ballet while sipping on a warm, delicious cup of coffee. I continued to watch the soft, white, tiny flakes dance across the green valley floor. As each minute passes, the frequency of the tiny, white dancers begins to increase. Each blade of grass slowly becomes covered by a delicate, white blanket.
I cannot seem to take my eyes away from the delightful event happening right outside my window. I watch as the valley floor is slowly engulfed by a beautiful invader. I pause only for a moment to refill my cup. I return to see even more of the pure, white, cotton-like blanket covering the ground. While gazing upon the spectatical, I also keep a watchful eye upon my watch.
The time begins to near for me to rendezvous with the angel of my dreams. Time slows to a crawl as I begin to remember her gorgeous figure. Her hair is like the finest Appalachian coal. Her skin is like the finest milk chocolate. Her eyes are like the most delicious, creamy chocolate chips. Her lips are like strawberry satin. Her smile is like a string of the finest pearls. However, there regions of her gorgeous continent that remains unexplored by my hands and eyes.
I tear myself away from the window as I notice the ambient light begins to dim. I make my way to my keys and wallet as I near the door to begin to warm up my SUV. As I set foot outside, I notice that the snow has reached ankle height. I step lively to the Suburban and enter it. I turn the key to hear it purr to life. I wait patiently as the Suburban warms up. Once it has fully woken up I shift into drive and begin cruising down the gravel drive.
The snow seems to lighten as I reach the main road. The roads seem sparsely filled with vehicles. The time passes rapidly as I make my way to my angel’s sweet, safe haven. The headlights make the damp road appear to be made of polished onyx. My heart lightens as I turn down my angel’s street. I feel light as a feather as I arrive at her house. As I stride up the damp walk love builds in my heart.
Upon reaching her door I feel joyful. I ring the doorbell and within mere moments, I am hit with her heavenly scent. The scent intensifies as we embrace each other. I notice that its composition sweet jasmine perfume and delightful pheromones. The embrace is for mere moment; however, it feels like an eternity…a blissful eternity. She grasps her coat and purse then we are off.
As we ride down the streets to the restaurant, she keeps her hand on mine. We arrive at the restaurant and park in front of the entrance. Before exiting the Suburban, she pulls me in for a quick, sweet kiss. The kiss was short yet delightful. The vallet just winks as I reach him the keys. We walk into the restaurant with her on my arm. We find our table and begin talking until the waiter arrives to take our orders.
Once we finish eating we make our way out of the restaurant. She lays her beautiful head upon my shoulder as we wait for the vallet to bring the car around. We get into the SUV and even before I start up the car she pulls me toward her. We kiss once more…another eternity goes by. We break the kiss and start the SUV and we make our way to my cabin. She hugs my arm as we drive down the road. An eternity passes as we move closer to the cabin.
Version 2
The Cold Winter Night
As I stood starring out the cabin’s large, delicate picture window, the snow began to fall. It looked like the angels had torn open pillows and began lightly sprinkling the pure, white down filler across the landscape. I stood watching the delicate ballet while sipping on a warm, delicious cup of coffee. I continued to watch the soft, white, tiny flakes dance across the green valley floor. As each minute passes, the frequency of the tiny, white dancers begins to increase. Each blade of grass slowly becomes covered by a delicate, white blanket.
I cannot seem to take my eyes away from the delightful event happening right outside my window. I watch as the valley floor is slowly engulfed by a beautiful invader. I pause only for a moment to refill my cup. I return to see even more of the pure, white, cotton-like blanket covering the ground. While gazing upon the spectatical, I also keep a watchful eye upon my watch.
The time begins to near for me to rendezvous with the angel of my dreams. Time slows to a crawl as I begin to remember her gorgeous figure. Her hair is like the finest Appalachian coal. Her skin is like the finest white milk. Her eyes are like the most delicious, creamy chocolate chips. Her lips are like strawberry satin. Her smile is like a string of the finest pearls. However, there regions of her gorgeous continent that remains unexplored by my hands and eyes.
I tear myself away from the window as I notice the ambient light begins to dim. I make my way to my keys and wallet as I near the door to begin to warm up my SUV. As I set foot outside, I notice that the snow has reached ankle height. I step lively to the Suburban and enter it. I turn the key to hear it purr to life. I wait patiently as the Suburban warms up. Once it has fully woken up I shift into drive and begin cruising down the gravel drive.
The snow seems to lighten as I reach the main road. The roads seem sparsely filled with vehicles. The time passes rapidly as I make my way to my angel’s sweet, safe haven. The headlights make the damp road appear to be made of polished onyx. My heart lightens as I turn down my angel’s street. I feel light as a feather as I arrive at her house. As I stride up the damp walk love builds in my heart.
Upon reaching her door I feel joyful. I ring the doorbell and within mere moments, I am hit with her heavenly scent. The scent intensifies as we embrace each other. I notice that its composition sweet jasmine perfume and delightful pheromones. The embrace is for mere moment; however, it feels like an eternity…a blissful eternity. She grasps her coat and purse then we are off.
As we ride down the streets to the restaurant, she keeps her hand on mine. We arrive at the restaurant and park in front of the entrance. Before exiting the Suburban, she pulls me in for a quick, sweet kiss. The kiss was short yet delightful. The vallet just winks as I reach him the keys. We walk into the restaurant with her on my arm. We find our table and begin talking until the waiter arrives to take our orders.
Once we finish eating we make our way out of the restaurant. She lays her beautiful head upon my shoulder as we wait for the vallet to bring the car around. We get into the SUV and even before I start up the car she pulls me toward her. We kiss once more…another eternity goes by. We break the kiss and start the SUV and we make our way to my cabin. She hugs my arm as we drive down the road. An eternity passes as we move closer to the cabin.
