OK I've got a few lyrics written but i don't know which ones would make for a good song so please message me with your verdicts about the following.
Slip Of The Lip:
Tonight I'm freezing inside
Looking up at you floating afar
Let's go back to the shore over there
The sky painted in deep black
At the end of today
I become unbound burning empty feelings
Don't be stuck on just one idea
Take your mind off of the past
A lie and a lie and a lie
And a slip and a slip and a slip of the lip
Tonight I'm freezing inside
Looking up at you floating afar
Let's go back to the shore over there
The sky painted in deep black
At the end of today
I become unbound burning empty feelings
Don't be stuck on just one idea
Take your mind off of the past
A lie and a lie and a lie
And a slip and a slip and a slip of the lip
Don't you remember you've broken my heart ?
We've come to the end so let's go to the start
Rain wipes off your dry tears
Just try to find something
I'm lost so far and I can't hold my breath
Take it all away
This is where I belong even if I can't find it
So can I creep inside you ?
And take it to heart when I say
This is where I belong even if I can't find it
Behind a Smile: A knock on my door disturbs my dream I'm confused by your sudden farewell The bonds between us are broken It's happened suddenly Nothing left for me There are a thousand things I need to tell you And all regrets in mind We went through some hard times together But now is the time to say goodbye I know what happened and I can't take it Telling myself there is nothing I can do But I don't wanna say goodbye I turn my eyes to you with a fake smile I always promised to come back here Although I never wanted to go back I don't think I can hurt for so long It's happened suddenly I know what happened and I can't take it Telling myself there is nothing I can do But I don't wanna say goodbye I turn my eyes to you with a fake smile We are set free Destined to go separate ways We've already gone too far I smell your perfume now everywhere I go I know what happened and I can't take it Telling myself there is nothing I can do But I don't wanna say goodbye I turn my eyes to you with a fake smile Untitled: Another place another time Another day another way Waiting for the end Another life another death Another born another gone Waiting for a beginning Waisted words waisted time I could move on but there's no sense Darkend room and a darkened heart The feeling has left me Like you ever cared Light has faded to black Haterd fills the room Anguish and pain Needs for you fade away I leave the room Broken frame on the floor Out to the world for more Waisted words waisted time I could move on but there's no sense Darkend room and a darkened heart The feeling has left me Like you ever cared Break the ties that bind me There's no way i'm looking back Walking towards the candle light Out from the darkness you put me in And i'm living like i've never been alive Night fades to dawn I wake up from the nightmare Love finds me here In the light of another, And for you...... i don't care no more Dead Radio: Dose it matter We're up again Erasing the shit from your radio Wake up It's lulling you to sleep Can't think for ourselves New day same songs Change up Bring it back When music was music Not comming from the Bullshit factory Get Up Time to start the revolution Sing it loud Playing it heavy Music is our personality Radio The Rock and the techno We're taking it back Lady Ga-Ga Ge get the fuck out We ain't pissin around Shit's gettin old Time for a new idea Unite under the flag we're stormin the station Burn it all down We ride We fight for the music variety is what we need Not your corporate seed Get Up Time to start the revolution Sing it loud Playing it heavy Music is our personality Radio The Rock and the techno We're taking it back