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Poetry~Cam Videos ~ Guitar & Spokenword
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Poetry ~ An Ascendant Diagnosis
created @ 2009-08-28 08:19:24
 


Response to one of Drow's status's:
'I live my life, full speed, full throttle, wrap my hand around the mic like a bum around a bottle, my philosophy is take a risk, cause its got to be..my way, or the highway, aint no man stoppin me...'

I expounded on afterwards cuz I was feeling it. Imma dub it...

An Ascendant Diagnosis

Word, care free?... Ya gotta be,
Stop me?... impossibly!
Life's too short to live a dichotomy
I control, I Lead, ma'fuck a destiny...
I'm not a slave or puppet to the powers that be.
I decide, & I ll thrive, ... carvin my path to liberty
Of self & mind,.. I'm jus MarQ intrinsically
Sheep follow feebly, indoctrinated …merely,
Blind to these facts, an oblivious to see...
They're lacking that ability to peer through clearly
The facades and ruses that abound, disingenuously
Or even the core of their own weaknesses, emotionally
Decipher what dwells deep down subconsciously
With no knowledge of self, it’s just a cycle of misery
Isn't it a damn shame… it’s the majority's mentality?
This Soul sickness of the masses… apparently
For my analysis is dire, if I diagnose it medically.
Eyes are fix & dilated, in a trance hypnotically
No reflex or heart beat in this shell, obviously
It’ll take I.v.’s of brutal truth, an a smack daily
To lull the rabble out of their sense of complacency
So that is my assessment,..diagnostically
I analyze everything…. That’s just me essentially
I break it down intricately, for my own mind’s mastery
But hey, dat's only one opinion.. Pay no heed to me!
Im just some fool, speaking his mind freely …
Through poetry.

Ant the Rants Response:

Today I'm your Shepard filled with sorrow,
Tomorrow, I'm your Predator who kills to swallow,
Now, or Never, Steal, Beg, Build, or Borrow,
Whatever it is that makes you feel you can fill the hallow,
Before I cut off the strings that you follow...
blindly, unwinding, and intertwining, your underlined whining,
mixed in with your daily finding, throughout your daily grinding,
trying, to mask the lack of depth of your exposed inner-lining,
you see, I found these special plastic frames,
to help me see, right-through plastic thangs,
make a few jokes, on how it all has to change,
while I secretly expose those for actin strange,
I'm still guna act the just same, sit back and maintain, relax and remain
with my syntax refrained, my tact explained,
cos THEY LIVE to be entertained,
OBEY on their billboard frame,
they might look different, but their minds are all the same...
My team don't feel sorry for you boo-boo brains...
BKPS up, and against the grain...
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