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The kiss
Written By ME

As I look down,
My vision locks upon your,
Beautiful majestic brown eyes,
Everything else fades away,
Into one big blur.

All I can see are those,
Big brown eyes,
Looking back at me.

I lean forward,
Getting close,
Soo close,
I can feel your breath,
Upon my cheek.

I pause,
For just a brief moment,
Just to sense your lips,
Drawing closer to mine.

I move in closer and closer,
Until my lips caress your,
Rose petal lips,
Ever soo softly.

We pull away,
To move closer together,
Our breath deepening.

Our lips open more and more,
As if they were awaiting permission,
Permission for our tongues,
To say,
Yes to a dance.


We pull away,
To move closer and closer,
Our tongues and lips,
Dancing together,
Caressing each other,
Holding each other,
Becoming more and more,
Passionate with each,
Embrace.

Our lips,
Our bodies,
Our souls,
Melting together,
To become one…

With every kiss,
We share,
I lose a small,
Piece of my soul,
To you.

But I gain,
A small piece,
Of your soul.

Soon,
We will be,
One…

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Rx Interloper...
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Liechtenstein
September 15, 2008 @ 6:34 am
my eyes are green, but excellent poem anyways...
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~Praterchic~
Rensselaer, IN
May 1, 2008 @ 10:34 am
loved it.. felt like you were telling me as i was sitting there.
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littlebit
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Baytown, TX
April 15, 2008 @ 12:15 pm
umm i luv this one 2!!! u are gud!!!
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Jewellee
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United States
April 8, 2008 @ 7:13 pm
deep thoughts 2 go with thoe deep eyes. very good
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1466783
United States
March 17, 2008 @ 8:20 am
Makes me rather happy I have big brown eyes
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Princess of Pe...
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United States
February 13, 2008 @ 8:01 pm
WOW i want to kiss you....
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you f**king wish
Beverly Hills, CA
February 7, 2008 @ 10:09 pm
Lucky girl.. Great Poet, Sexy eyes, and thick lips what more could a girl want?
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Enid, OK
February 7, 2008 @ 10:16 am
I LOVE THIS ONE TOO!! I LIKE THE WAY YOU LET YOUR READER FEEL YOUR EMOTION! GOOD JOB!
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pretty little a...
Winston Salem, NC
February 7, 2008 @ 10:04 am
i like ur poem its good
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Oops143
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Springfield, IL
February 7, 2008 @ 10:02 am
One of my fav poems lemme know what you guys think...
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