deftonette's blog: "Metrical Composition"

there is a soft glow around you,
those exact words cannot describe it.
i know there is much more about you,
but i feel you'd rather hide it...
 
from the moment that we kissed, 
i thought too good to be true; 
but now my heart plays a different song &
its written just for you. 
 
in your eyes i can honestly see 
how our love could grow so endlessly
& all the good things i could pry from thee
to help you become who you need to be.
 
i feel your soul enrapture me 
when you look in my eyes so amorously...
to know that you trust in me could be the
best reality
 
i wish that you could grow old with me, 
i know that sounds silly, 
but thats how i dream it would be...
you me and perhaps a family,
a plan thats fit for just you & me.
 
and i know someday you will see
just how much you truly mean to me
loyal to you is what i'll always be
a muse for your eyes to once really see
just how hard i would try to make your life perfect
to not even give you the chance to think if i was worth it.
 
free from harm, worry & pain 
i swear i'd never let any of those hurt you again.
every moment i have spent with you i wish was so much longer
& now that im away from you my heart seems to grow fonder
 
i feel like i have known you forever,
heres a simple thought for you to endeavor,
a spot in my heart; reserved just for you
a safe place for you to crawl inside when you feel real blue.
 
i hope i have not frightened you with how i feel inside,
its just a wonderful feeling;
a feeling i will not hide.  

another poem i wrote. i was probably about 15/16 when i wrote this so don't judge so critically.

 again - don't steal my stuff without asking. this is more of my own raw emotion.