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created on 12/10/2010  |  http://fubar.com/poetry/b338208

A Joy I Felt

She’s amazing! She’s perfect!
She’s everything I dreamed!
Sophisticated, attractive,
She’s everything that she seems!
I looked in her eyes,
I was at a los-for-words.
I still couldn’t speak,
Even afterwards.
I was out of my mind,
I thought I was crazy before.
She had me all fuzzy,
I was cocky before.
I stay ready for war.
She put a stop to that.
She pulled it out of my core.
None of that was allowed,
It stayed outside the door.
The haterid, the grudge,
The brolic attitude,
The violence, the Marine,
The ghetto nigga called Luke.
She wanted Elliot,
That part of me nobody know.
She wanted to see the hidden man,
Like that was her goal.
She got it for show.
I was putty in her hand.
I always thought,
I was a uncontrolled man.
She shocked me,
I shocked her.
She surprised me,
I amazed her.
I did all that I can,
To show her my worth.
Said I was waiting for her,
Sense the day of my birth.
For the day I was a Smerf.
I felt so little.
I did and said things,
That was just strait pitiful.
But, what’s done is done.
Its in a page of history.
She’s not other girls,
She’s not out dissing me.
Im thinking of her,
She maybe thinking of me.
I love how she felt in my arms,
The food she fed to me.
How she was cool in her ways,
And the things she said to me.
To look in her eyes,
Put a smile on my face.
I swear ill do anything,
Ill rob that place,
Ill get in a high speed chase.
Ill slow down my pace,
Anything for your grace.
Your time, your space,
That ever-loving grace.

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